Now the waiting is almost done.
I lingered to see your shadow
With the sun on your back.
I passed the time to see
And to hold the sweet face
I pined for a long time.
Now the waiting is almost done
It seems you will not come.
See you then in another season,
Perhaps past this life and world.
I have not tarried around much
For fear of missing your coming.
Now the waiting is almost done.
As the last vestiges of sunlight
Prepare to hide beneath the horizon
And to kiss the heavens goodbye,
The tangerine sky fades to black.
Tomorrow holds much hope and promise.
Now the waiting is almost done.
Finally I am letting you go.
I am giving up the flimsy
Joy of your long awaited return
For tomorrow’s hope of new adventures.
I will salute the early dawn!
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BASE!!!
ReplyDeletenice tula, ang ganda ng mga larawan.
Finally I am letting you go.
I am giving up the flimsy
Joy of your long awaited return
For tomorrow’s hope of new adventures.
Base nga! Hehe... Thanks Alvin...
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ReplyDelete2Nd base ba ako... yipeeee!!!! buti nlang napa aga ang bisita ko
ReplyDeleteramdam ko kase na may bagong pix kang maiipopost eh
and gotcha!!! ang gandah!!!!
preho kami ni stain ng nagustuhang linya :-)
beautiful! clap clap! :) napakamelancholic...
ReplyDeleteSPEAK-less ako.. hehe :lol:
btw, your own poem???? huwaw! mr. talented. :)
ReplyDeleteit's quite sad but there's a sense of hopefulness.
ReplyDeletenonetheless, it's a good poem.
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tokayo, hindi ako nakareply sa fb chat.tulog na ko nun.iniiwan ko lang talagang nakabukas yung laptop.hehe
Thanks tokayo... Malungkot nga pero hopeful... :)
ReplyDeleteOkay lang yun, erratic din yung connection ko, palagi akong nadi-disconnect... hehehe. Kaya naglog-off din agad... :)
Hehehe... Thanks AC... Oo, akin ito. Kagabi ko lang ginawa... hehehe...
ReplyDeleteMarami pa dito sa isa kong bahay:
http://coolwordweaver.wordpress.com
Second base nga Lhen!
ReplyDeleteBilib na ako sa pakiramdam mo.. Ako umaasa lang sa Google Reader eh... hehehe...
Ang sunset na ito ay kuha sa Malapascua Island noong pumunta ako dun last year... :)
Salamat!
ganda ng tula tsaka ng sunset!
ReplyDeletebakit kasi hintay ng hintay? hihihi
hehe ang lungkot.
ReplyDeletepero hopeful ang dating ng tula :-) nice silhouette there
sige po, dalawin ko yan in a bit. tapusin ko lng muna etong trabaho. huhuhu :(
ReplyDeleteNalipay gid ako nga may mga tawo nga gintawo para magdakop kag magsulat kabahin sa kanamion sang kabuhi. sang pagkinahanglan sang paghulat kag pagbuya :) ayus man akon padugo? haha :)
ReplyDeletehay, i can just stare at the sunset forever and read this poem for....
Kasi kung minsan kailangang umasa sa pagbabalik... hehehe... pero malapit na nga matapos eh... hehehe...
ReplyDeleteThanks totomai... Yeah, hope is a good thing, it makes us go on... :)
ReplyDeleteAyos ah... hehehe... Madugo man ni ilong nila makabasa sini... :) Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWAITING - this has been a gift and burden to me, pushing me into the wiser edge of waiting unconditionally, that is, of growing in freedom from the categories of success and failures, of public approval and the constant scratching on the wall for what feels good - the standard we often measure ourselves with. Thank you for this beautiful signpost poem kapatid...
ReplyDeleteSalamat din kapatid... Tama ka kapatid, we often measure our self-worth in these terms. And it is very hard to break free from their cadences. Most of the time, we have to step in coherent time with their beats. Indeed, waiting while enjoying the journey along with the lessons and bruises will make us grow to allow us to be free. But I think that a delicate balance should be maintained between the goal to really break free of these measures and the "getting used" to marching with their music. Perhaps a new post from you would clarify this? :)
ReplyDeletewaiting is as difficult as letting go. siguro labs gyud nimo sya noh? hehe :) padayon mark!
ReplyDeleteGuilty as charged... hehehe... :)
ReplyDeleteGANDA NG POEM PLUS THE PHOTO. Sorry caps lock. Sunrise ba 'to?
ReplyDeleteCool Water,
ReplyDeleteI believe you will be an excellent teacher. You are passionate about the subject matter, and you also have compassion/empathy for ..... all living things. I really enjoyed catching up on your blog. It seems to have taken a different direction. The poetry is just beautiful; it adds dimension to the images. Finally, I usually don't read tags, but I had to read yours. I quite enjoyed it because it covered so many areas of your life, including your dad's underwear!
Thanks Red... Okay lang.... Sunset yan... :)
ReplyDeleteHaha! Thank you Caroline for your kind words... Yeah, I have to admit my blog has taken a quite different direction these few weeks probably because the weather has been erratic and it is hard to schedule a trek or an outdoor adventure because of the frequent rain... Nevertheless, I welcome this change in my blogging.
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking time to read the tag... Hahaha! My dad also laughs when I remind him of his remark from time to time that I did not end up becoming a doctor because of the underwear... hahaha!
mark, ganda ng kuha nito. damang dama yong paglubog ng araw.
ReplyDeletesyempre, nice poem!
Salamat kapatid... :)
ReplyDeletewow.. picture ng sunset.. tugmang-tugma sa poem ang picture
ReplyDeletegaling ;)
Salamat uli kapatid! :)
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